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Nombre: George
Miembro desde: 20/10/23
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Yerro por zion no bara

No menores de 18 años; Reviews4
Resumen:

Shaka de Virgo atraviesa momentos complejos, pensaba que su vida era perfecta, pero la distancia y la soledad lo llevan al lado de otra persona, descubriendo que se pueden cometer faltas por equivocación o descuido, por soledad o por algo mas ¿Qué tan responsable será de sus yerros?

 



Nombre: George Logado
Fecha: 20/10/23 Review para: Capítulo 1: Capítulo 1

Hi, Zion! What a gripping tale! In one of my favorites, even if Lkki is now the antagonist, the boys have a tendency to treat the naive victims—who are typically emotionally fragile people—cruelly online games, and there is an awful truth to the idea that winning a bet with friends can lead to one's defeat.

In this instance, Shaka would not have fallen in front of a young man who oddly resembles her husband in terms of character and bearing if she had not been emotionally vulnerable and separated from him. It is possible that Ikki's similarity to Death Mask reminded him of himself, which is what caused him to make the mistake.



Respuesta del autor:
Hi George, thank you for reading and commenting on this fic, sorry for my delay in responding but it was personal issues and then the page crashed that prevented me from continuing with my stories.
It's good that you liked the plot, I wanted to do something with these characters and Shaka was the chosen, with a thoughtless Ikki and a Death Mask who loves him but wasn't around. I hope that if you read this message you know that I really appreciate the comments, they are very precious to me.
Be fine abd healty.
Atte. Zion no Bara

 

 
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